mosherballoon
09-10-2009, 03:17 AM
Ok so I have had this idea for a story for awhile now and i want to see what you guys think about it. I'm not going to right a full story just some rough guide lines that I will expand on if there is enough interest.
The story starts with a model waiting for a shoot, sat at a computer desk. Taylor says she just quickly going to the store and be back shortly, but before she leaves she warns the model not to touch the computer as it has a virus.
Taylor leaves for the store. The model is quick to turn to the computer, "A virus? yeah right, you just don't want me reading your emails Taylor" The model browses through Taylor's inbox and finds an unread message intitle 'Read me Now' The model clicks the message and want to know what its about. There is simple a link a website, the model clicks it. It brings her to youtube (my profile page :P) and she looks and studies the videos "what the hell is this crap? who would want to blow up like that?" suddenly the computer turns itself off. "oh shit, did i do that" the model then complains about feeling strange. then she starts to blow up. (i was thinking of the inflatable suit to be used) then insert classic inflation lines such as " what's happening to me?" "'i'm blowing up like a balloon" " i'm getting to big" " my clothes are so tight" etc. eventually the model gets huge panicing and screaming for help. the computer then turns its self back on with the words 'time to pop now' on the screen (maybe use a screensaver with scrolling text on it) then there is an off screen pop. seconds later taylor comes home "i'm back" she looks in the room and notices tatters on the floor " what the hell? she makes a mess of my house and just leaves, thats another shoot down the drain." Taylor notices the computer is on " what? shes been reading my e-mails aswell?!" Taylor sits down and the notices a unread message in her inbox entitled 'read me now'....and then ends on like a cliff hanger.
let me know what everyone thinks, as for the model i would personally like to see Eris, Moxxie or Holly (not seen her in awhile) Hope you guys like it and hope the staff of taylormadeclips likes it enough to have ago at making it. thanks guys
The story starts with a model waiting for a shoot, sat at a computer desk. Taylor says she just quickly going to the store and be back shortly, but before she leaves she warns the model not to touch the computer as it has a virus.
Taylor leaves for the store. The model is quick to turn to the computer, "A virus? yeah right, you just don't want me reading your emails Taylor" The model browses through Taylor's inbox and finds an unread message intitle 'Read me Now' The model clicks the message and want to know what its about. There is simple a link a website, the model clicks it. It brings her to youtube (my profile page :P) and she looks and studies the videos "what the hell is this crap? who would want to blow up like that?" suddenly the computer turns itself off. "oh shit, did i do that" the model then complains about feeling strange. then she starts to blow up. (i was thinking of the inflatable suit to be used) then insert classic inflation lines such as " what's happening to me?" "'i'm blowing up like a balloon" " i'm getting to big" " my clothes are so tight" etc. eventually the model gets huge panicing and screaming for help. the computer then turns its self back on with the words 'time to pop now' on the screen (maybe use a screensaver with scrolling text on it) then there is an off screen pop. seconds later taylor comes home "i'm back" she looks in the room and notices tatters on the floor " what the hell? she makes a mess of my house and just leaves, thats another shoot down the drain." Taylor notices the computer is on " what? shes been reading my e-mails aswell?!" Taylor sits down and the notices a unread message in her inbox entitled 'read me now'....and then ends on like a cliff hanger.
let me know what everyone thinks, as for the model i would personally like to see Eris, Moxxie or Holly (not seen her in awhile) Hope you guys like it and hope the staff of taylormadeclips likes it enough to have ago at making it. thanks guys